robinrott
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Post by robinrott on Mar 4, 2014 6:20:14 GMT
I may have also made a mom concept, but the more I look at it, the more I love Moga's mom design...
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moga
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Post by moga on Mar 4, 2014 12:43:12 GMT
I may have also made a mom concept, but the more I look at it, the more I love Moga's mom design... Holy. Crap. that is just adorbs * v* I actually like some of the nuances you added here! Especially mugi-brows :3 Here's what I'll do though- when I get back to my computer today I'll do some detail/variant mom designs- F is actually pretty popular too so I'll go ahead and do some detail designs of her also! Thanks for everyone so far for the input~! |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 4, 2014 13:24:59 GMT
It seems the winner will be either C or F. When we decide, we could make the other option a recurring character. Possibly an ally. Or a part of her personality.
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doodle
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So much snow..
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Post by doodle on Mar 4, 2014 15:47:40 GMT
I like F too  Oh, and about the "silent or not silent" thing. I'm fine with dialogue as long as it's not too...jarring? Like, if it takes away from the "dream/surreal" aspect of the game (if we are even going with that kind of mood). I don't really have much to say about the theme of the game, I'm just going to be a spriter/chipset maker don't mind me aha |
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Post by Rindre on Mar 4, 2014 23:22:06 GMT
It seems the winner will be either C or F. When we decide, we could make the other option a recurring character. Possibly an ally. Or a part of her personality. Part of her personality! I like it. |
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moga
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Post by moga on Mar 5, 2014 1:06:30 GMT
It seems the winner will be either C or F. When we decide, we could make the other option a recurring character. Possibly an ally. Or a part of her personality. Part of her personality! I like it. It could be a past version of her she is projecting, like I mentioned before- no mother doesn't have a complex or two about herself. As we get older, we all wish we were a little younger sometimes and got to do more things. So, if we do go with the mother as the main, I'd like to really dig deep and get something stirring, because it's rich territory for surrealistic fears and exploration. Also, here is a more detailed sketch of the mom. This is very much up for change, but I tried to at least get the general feel down I saw at least. She's got short brown hair, slightly faded but not too much. The short was a move to keep it practical but fashionable still- with a clip to make it a little cuter. The red apron, then the lighter blue dress and white collared top. She also wears pantyhose and orange colored slip ons. Since she's from around 30ish years ago, I suggest she keep a nintendo or perhaps genesis around the house to play some of her old games and stuff from when she was a kid- people love to collect stuff they liked as a child. Since this *is* a YNFG i personally don't mind the idea of the minigames being included in this way possibly. Some of the channel ideas could include her wondering around some the sets of the stuff she used to watch, some of her old memories, and her fantasies as well. Her psychological projection of aggression could be something different than say a knife, and maybe something more like everything she touches at a point turns to dust and fades away- or when she wears a certain article of clothing she feels more confident and protected from nightmarish threats if any occurs. I'd like to urge mapmakers and other concept idea people to veer away more from the gigantic maps and dependence on chasers as much- since psychologically if you are stuck in a house your mind is not going to be as open as even madotsuki's was, but her mind can still be portrayed just as mysterious and mystic. Just some thoughts if we do happen to go this route.  |
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robinrott
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Post by robinrott on Mar 5, 2014 2:10:45 GMT
Part of her personality! I like it. It could be a past version of her she is projecting, like I mentioned before- no mother doesn't have a complex or two about herself. As we get older, we all wish we were a little younger sometimes and got to do more things. So, if we do go with the mother as the main, I'd like to really dig deep and get something stirring, because it's rich territory for surrealistic fears and exploration. Also, here is a more detailed sketch of the mom. This is very much up for change, but I tried to at least get the general feel down I saw at least. She's got short brown hair, slightly faded but not too much. The short was a move to keep it practical but fashionable still- with a clip to make it a little cuter. The red apron, then the lighter blue dress and white collared top. She also wears pantyhose and orange colored slip ons. Since she's from around 30ish years ago, I suggest she keep a nintendo or perhaps genesis around the house to play some of her old games and stuff from when she was a kid- people love to collect stuff they liked as a child. Since this *is* a YNFG i personally don't mind the idea of the minigames being included in this way possibly. Some of the channel ideas could include her wondering around some the sets of the stuff she used to watch, some of her old memories, and her fantasies as well. Her psychological projection of aggression could be something different than say a knife, and maybe something more like everything she touches at a point turns to dust and fades away- or when she wears a certain article of clothing she feels more confident and protected from nightmarish threats if any occurs. I'd like to urge mapmakers and other concept idea people to veer away more from the gigantic maps and dependence on chasers as much- since psychologically if you are stuck in a house your mind is not going to be as open as even madotsuki's was, but her mind can still be portrayed just as mysterious and mystic. Just some thoughts if we do happen to go this route. There we go. I absolutely love her. Her updated design is great, and I love the idea of her keeping the 'ol genesis around, and the concept of her having smaller maps to characterize her being cooped up all the time and how cramped she must feel and oh my gosh oh gosh Moga, you've done it again! If this is going to be the finalized protag, then I'm so excited for this game! (≧◡≦) My vote goes 1000% towards this option; hands-down. also i kinda wanna name her Letty, but that's just me |
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Post by Rindre on Mar 5, 2014 4:11:28 GMT
![]() Ohh!! I forgot to post my interpretation of mommy protag. I showed Moga it yesterday. Sorry if it's blurry, and my proportions are weird but I'm still learning !! Here it is. |
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Noyemi K
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Post by Noyemi K on Mar 5, 2014 9:22:50 GMT
I drew a bunch of pictures, but they have nothing to do with this game... or anything really. Whoops.
I do like her refined design; it's cute. Who is being tasked with making her sprite?
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robinrott
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Post by robinrott on Mar 5, 2014 13:02:35 GMT
I drew a bunch of pictures, but they have nothing to do with this game... or anything really. Whoops. I do like her refined design; it's cute. Who is being tasked with making her sprite? I'd like to give it a whirl after school, if y'all don't mind. Maybe a few people could make a sprite, and we can vote on that too..? |
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doodle
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Post by doodle on Mar 5, 2014 13:55:31 GMT
I drew a bunch of pictures, but they have nothing to do with this game... or anything really. Whoops. I do like her refined design; it's cute. Who is being tasked with making her sprite? I could try making a sprite too (after school today). I'll try to make it look good aha;; |
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moga
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Post by moga on Mar 5, 2014 15:36:41 GMT
Working on sprites today ~ Edit: I did a finished possible sprite:   |
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Nyrator
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Post by Nyrator on Mar 5, 2014 17:46:51 GMT
Tried designing some basic sprites in different styles, what I have so far:  Also, I like that sprite Moga. Maybe a bit less contrast in the hair, fix the upward-facing sprite a bit (though I'm not sure what she looks like from behind, I thought the red on it would be her blue skirt. I could be wrong). |
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Post by Rindre on Mar 5, 2014 18:04:02 GMT
Tried designing some basic sprites in different styles, what I have so far: Also, I like that sprite Moga. Maybe a bit less contrast in the hair, fix the upward-facing sprite a bit (though I'm not sure what she looks like from behind, I thought the red on it would be her blue skirt. I could be wrong). I really like that second one. |
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moga
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Post by moga on Mar 5, 2014 21:17:50 GMT
Tried designing some basic sprites in different styles, what I have so far: Also, I like that sprite Moga. Maybe a bit less contrast in the hair, fix the upward-facing sprite a bit (though I'm not sure what she looks like from behind, I thought the red on it would be her blue skirt. I could be wrong). Nice sprites! I tend to like the simple stuff. You're not wrong there- I messed up~ I lessened the contrast, and fixed the up-sprite. Also, I added a wip of the glasses girl and I gave her a little bag as a additional attribute since she was looking a little bland next to herself.  Also! Very important! We need to arrange some group meets so that we can all get some consensus and on the same page about the project! So, when is a good time for everyone in the next few days? And if you know someone involved, but hasnt posted yet- drag them to whenever the meet time is determined to be. |
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Oh, and about the "silent or not silent" thing. I'm fine with dialogue as long as it's not too...jarring? Like, if it takes away from the "dream/surreal" aspect of the game (if we are even going with that kind of mood). I don't really have much to say about the theme of the game, I'm just going to be a spriter/chipset maker don't mind me aha
